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HomeMy WebLinkAbout258"r9 lhJ 19 pv\r\', sL , - 15 ?-sr5 OL LN;A +t 6rts e"r? a,{ tilu6itWnsn d?o elslk i,lhtr 0cA "m%,wo,il O"laqllr? E.>-,et)9 n brrd/,(e a t>1 z7g ts1 0 E-) .efz s+"ft Jn7, r, \ A 38 f. -,*"nr ^ , ry75)t_l3 x ?n, ,4nc^- %,-n\*0A*\ r,1 -(, {a.lrl ts ho% l/" {c,*ux u 6)L ,fr fl",!brrh"\ 4, f l't 7 (page 3)Comments submitted repeatedly at different points in the process by the Port Gamble S'Klallam Tribe (PGST) were not addressed in th'e [fS PGST cbmments to the Draft SEIS were not included in the FinalSE|S ; As \-{.'-<6E-l 5-- Art\., l,^1. l-. ^of,.,,0 {.. t,'^J r$1. {. lte-"-o ^ J rl 1 ,t'.};.a, .9 PuL coY\m -l,,.ok ns Lotrler 4tt Patty Charnas From: Sent: To: Subject: Attachments: Sincerely, Cynthia cynthiakoan@ gmail.com on behalf of Cynthia Koan < cynthia.koan@ gmail.com > Tuesday, December L9,20L7 9:01 PM Planning Commission Desk; Patty Charnas; David Greetham Please forward to PC Intro and vision document draft L2-L9-L7.pdf Hello Planning Commissioners, Please find attached a rework of the agreed upon intro/vision document. As we all know, there were some glitches in transmitting the work of Lorna and Matt, who were charged with transcribing the agreed upon document from our facilitated session with Essie Hicks on September 19th. Sadly the audio recording is difficult to impossible to understand, but it is clear in looking at the images of the white board sent out to everyone after the PC workshop and comparing them to the document we have last seen that some of the work done by Loma and Matt was indeed lost, as several Planning Commissioners have noted. One example is that the title of the intro section, "Our Beautiful Jefferson County" was lost and the second heading, "Now into the future" was sitting in the middle of the future-vision section instead of at its beginning. You will find both of these fixed. Other edits agreed upon in our session with Essie that Lorna remembers working on with Matt and that are referenced in the white board notes were not reflected in the copy sent from staff, including several paragraphs that were entirely missing that we'd agreed to keep from Matt's version. Additionally, Mark Jochems received feedback from the public about the names of tribes and the references to them, as well as an agreed upon rework of the ruImes of Jefferson County rivers. That feedback and work is reflected in this final draft. I'm hoping that you will find this version an accurate representation of what was agreed upon after our facilitated work session together and that we can move to send this forward to the public for comment. I think we should all be proud of all the hard work we all put into this Comprehensive Plan intro and vision section. Looking forward to seeing you all tonight. I o,K t lfo (,r) afiru*,*o C- o(o{ 3 + --S ? \g .Q' \ tq* { Efi\ sl -e a$ 4 Gj; \3,s \*s.p $18.+s, ,w 7Bo ( 7) t8.qo.23O /410.t* (t) q,Jtq[ $ An^",ar-/{" {"! ,>